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Ghost Hunt fanfict

  • Mar. 14th, 2007 at 5:59 PM
gh//naru//annoyed
So this is my first anime fanfict ever, hope you like it, comments are welcome and sorry its so short.

Title: I promise
Author: YamiKakyuu
Characters: Noll and Gene
Disclaimer: This is all based on Ono Fuyumi-sensei's creation ^^
Warning: Spoilers if you dont know anything about Gene or Oliver


“Will you stop making that face?”  Gene smiled as he put a few more things in his suitcase. 

Noll sat on the end of the bed scowling; arms and legs crossed watching his twin pack.

“I’m not going to be gone long, just the exorcism, then some sightseeing and then I’ll be back plus I already asked you if you wanted to come, remember?”  Gene looked over at Noll who let out a small sigh.

“I cant, I have a lecture I need to give.” he replied quietly.

Gene closed his suitcase and sat down next to his brother on the bed. 

Noll looked away.

“You’re not going to make this any easier for me if you keep acting like this” Gene said calmly.

Sighing, Noll uncrossed his arms and gripped the edge of the bed.  “I don’t like it when you’re not here, it just doesn’t feel right.”

Smiling, Gene put his hand on top of his little brother’s hand.

“I’ll be back soon, I promise.”




Comments

[info]lkk wrote:
Mar. 14th, 2007 11:56 pm (UTC)
I've read this 4 times now and it ends so sadly each time. :(
Gene! Don't go. Noll is right. It's not right with you two separated.
[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 12:47 am (UTC)
I read it about 30 times before I posted it, kept hoping it would end different XD Thanks for the comments
[info]honeysempai wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 12:34 am (UTC)
GOOD JOB DAHLING!
I shouldn't be online right now... but....

*WIBBLE!!!!*
Good job!!! I adore it, you should post it at the com its really god.If you keep reading it, it gets sadder each time especially when you think that could have been their very last meeting. Yami you made me sad! You wrote Gene very well, especially since we don't really see him that much, but you wrote him IC in my opinion.

I'm so mem-ing this. <3
[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 12:48 am (UTC)
Re: GOOD JOB DAHLING!
Sorry I made you sad and I did end up posting this on both comms. Thanks for the comments ^^
[info]amethyst_water wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 02:17 am (UTC)
found this through the community.
i can imagine gene smiling at noll after the last line. *sniff*
no, don't go gene. :'(

[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 02:29 am (UTC)
I know.... :(
Thanks for the comment!
[info]akinarei wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 03:25 am (UTC)
Angsty. I guess Naru isn't quite as mature as he'd have us believe. ^_^
[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 12:00 pm (UTC)
Hehehe. I have a feeling he was alittle different around Gene. Thanks for the comment ^_^
[info]gold_dusted wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 11:26 am (UTC)
I've just read this about 4 times and it's still so sad. I didn't glance down at all while I was reading it.. and then nearly burst into tears when I read the last sentence.

That's such a perfect first fanfic. Thanks for posting it, goodness knows we need more of them... and it's so perfect. I'm just going to keep repeating myself here because it's the only fitting word...
[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2007 12:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks, I feel bad that I keep making ppl sad though XD Thanks for the comment ^^
[info]lysabelle_93 wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2007 07:07 pm (UTC)
that was pretty cute ^^ Naru is really... not selfish but... childhish(????) dont know the right word... it's sure that he's not that mature or adult here... he seems to pout to his big bro ^^ thank for this one... now i want more fanfic on GH also .><.
[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2007 07:41 pm (UTC)
I was trying to pull of stubborn since we've all seen that he's that XD Thanks for the comment and Im currently working on another one ^^
[info]lysabelle_93 wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2007 08:03 pm (UTC)
stubborn... that was the word i wanted to use... cool i'm gonna read it when it comes so ^^
[info]kuribayuki wrote:
Apr. 20th, 2007 07:52 pm (UTC)
Short and Awesome and sad *thumbs up*
[info]yamikakyuu wrote:
Apr. 20th, 2007 08:12 pm (UTC)
Thanks ^^ glad you liked it